LankBlunts
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I'm currently making an attempt at doing a sci-fi type short story, but i wanted some creative input.
In the distant future, the earth is in it's final battle, technology has moved on and the true antichrist is revealed as an android leader who wants mankind destroyed once and for all.
Que plot sequence of the explanations about early warnings like the barcode having 666 in its line codes, and www (w being hebrew for 6), man cannot buy or sell without it, the forehead and the hand (mouse and computer screen) etc etc.
So this progresses and a human assasin is sent to assasinate the leader, the leader is shot in the head in front of many people, but the BEAST does not die from the fatal wound and so people in other countrys are like: "who is like unto the beast, how can we fight a military leader revealed as a self repairable android"
The antichrist steps up the game and produces android soldiers (demon squadron), que nuclear holocaust, panic, destruction disease and war.
Something has to be done, the resistance must not fail, so they set up the G.E.S.I.S project: Genetically Engineered Super Intelligent System
The system is desighned to create a benevolent android type lifeform, but it must be born from women, essentially a human android, a human with android super intelligence and self repair.
Since the USA and most of europe is in total chaos, the resistance chooses a more less occupied land and sends Lt.Gabriel Smith to find a women many many years in the past at a time before the trouble started.
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So you get the idea, is it possible to tie this up so it can work?, like would it be better if they did not know they will create a different timeline? Obviously this means the barcode/www plot stuff cannot be mentioned, nor can the bible, since the bible IS in the alternate time-line (ours).
I mean it would be a bit crap if they know of jesus, this timeline is an alternate timeline, to create a reason for the history.
And there has to be a plot twist, like the future at the start of the story not occuring because of the g.e.s.i.s project.
It's starting to look like there is no way this can be a short story, i'd need to write in a plot of 2000 years where jesus did not exist and explain why our timeline won't end up in the same boat.
In the distant future, the earth is in it's final battle, technology has moved on and the true antichrist is revealed as an android leader who wants mankind destroyed once and for all.
Que plot sequence of the explanations about early warnings like the barcode having 666 in its line codes, and www (w being hebrew for 6), man cannot buy or sell without it, the forehead and the hand (mouse and computer screen) etc etc.
So this progresses and a human assasin is sent to assasinate the leader, the leader is shot in the head in front of many people, but the BEAST does not die from the fatal wound and so people in other countrys are like: "who is like unto the beast, how can we fight a military leader revealed as a self repairable android"
The antichrist steps up the game and produces android soldiers (demon squadron), que nuclear holocaust, panic, destruction disease and war.
Something has to be done, the resistance must not fail, so they set up the G.E.S.I.S project: Genetically Engineered Super Intelligent System
The system is desighned to create a benevolent android type lifeform, but it must be born from women, essentially a human android, a human with android super intelligence and self repair.
Since the USA and most of europe is in total chaos, the resistance chooses a more less occupied land and sends Lt.Gabriel Smith to find a women many many years in the past at a time before the trouble started.
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So you get the idea, is it possible to tie this up so it can work?, like would it be better if they did not know they will create a different timeline? Obviously this means the barcode/www plot stuff cannot be mentioned, nor can the bible, since the bible IS in the alternate time-line (ours).
I mean it would be a bit crap if they know of jesus, this timeline is an alternate timeline, to create a reason for the history.
And there has to be a plot twist, like the future at the start of the story not occuring because of the g.e.s.i.s project.
It's starting to look like there is no way this can be a short story, i'd need to write in a plot of 2000 years where jesus did not exist and explain why our timeline won't end up in the same boat.