Young Haohmaru

[striderpunk]

self explanatory

 

[@M]

As I mentioned previously, please send email to my Hotmail address (BloodLent@hotmail.com) instead of my Yahoo address (my Yahoo account was stolen from me, and I just got it back earlier this week after about a month of not being able to access it, anyway, even though I have it back now, I'm going to use my Hotmail address for email from now on).

Anyway, my critique: Your body proportions are better than they were in the last pic, but they still need work. If you're going for a super deformed look, than it's not too bad, but if you're going for a realistically proportioned human body, then the head is still too big and the arms/hands too small in relation to the rest of the body. Also, the head and neck are shifted too far to the right. Try to clean up your lines a little bit too - it'll be easier for others and yourself to see what's working and what isn't.

 

[striderpunk]

yeah I was going for the super-deformed look
like in ss2 with the huge head and small body


btw I did it in the middle of class cut me some slack

 

[striderpunk]

btw, I also sprained my wrist before I drew that

 

[Chicago Cheeseburgler Crew]

btw, I also sprained my wrist before I drew that

That's no excuse.

 

[Final Symphony]

I like the defiant look on his face.

 

[striderpunk]

That's no excuse.

butta' man sometimes youreally boil my lobster


and thanx final symphony