My first insert

BoyProdigy

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What do you think

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I stole the controls from Mr. Wiz's Metal Slug X insert, I used the template from NeoCverA's site and the rest was just kicking around on my hard drive so I'm not really sure where they came from.
 

neo>all

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I like the style of it but it looks too sterile. Try to butch it up a bit but very nice
 

Lime2K

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ENGRISH ALERT!

On the back of the insert, you have 'Tama', not 'Tarma'.

Oh, and the white looks good, but there's just too much - maybe a light gradient in the back would look good?
 

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Cover looks great... back needs a little organization.. very unique overall!
 

Teela

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Love the artwork! Great job!

The title of the post is funny though - "my first insert" - sounds like you are talking about losing your virginity.
 

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Teela said:
Love the artwork! Great job!

The title of the post is funny though - "my first insert" - sounds like you are talking about losing your virginity.

In a way he has. He popped his insert cherry. This one would be especially nice for a GBA port of Slug X for its cutesy graphics - they look a lot like the stuff they use for the GBA/ Neo Pocket stuff.

Nice job though and welcome to the creative side of the road BoyProdigy!
 

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Lime2K said:
ENGRISH ALERT!

On the back of the insert, you have 'Tama', not 'Tarma'.

Oh, and the white looks good, but there's just too much - maybe a light gradient in the back would look good?
Well that makes it more authentic anyway... there are loads of mistakes in the ngh games!!....The insert is fresh & bouncy!....a new take on the genre...we ALL welcome,....WELL DONE!!.
 

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Nice Job! I like the overall design, very different and fresh, with a nice cutesy cartoonish feel to it.

The only thing I might change is to take away the Japanese symbols above the 'Metal Slug X' title. It looks a little out of place with the rest of the insert being the English-looking type.
 

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by the way I have tons of cartoony art from an image CD I got of Metal Slug Pachislot art, if that's ever any good to you or anyone looking to make an insert like this please let me know. Great job by the way, have always loved more non-traditional inserts.

Here's one example
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BoyProdigy

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lithy said:
by the way I have tons of cartoony art from an image CD I got of Metal Slug Pachislot art, if that's ever any good to you or anyone looking to make an insert like this please let me know. Great job by the way, have always loved more non-traditional inserts.
I'd be willing to see what I can do with it.

Does anyone have a site where I can post the PDF of this insert up?
 

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lithy said:
by the way I have tons of cartoony art from an image CD I got of Metal Slug Pachislot art, if that's ever any good to you or anyone looking to make an insert like this please let me know. Great job by the way, have always loved more non-traditional inserts.

Here's one example
example.jpg


Yeah, do a boxed version all cartoony! :buttrock:
 

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cool

BoyProdigy said:
What do you think

firstinsert8at.jpg


I stole the controls from Mr. Wiz's Metal Slug X insert, I used the template from NeoCverA's site and the rest was just kicking around on my hard drive so I'm not really sure where they came from.

Looks a lil kiddy, but good.
 

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BoyProdigy

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could you re-upload the logo. The file contains errors.

Great stuff btw
 
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lithy

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BoyProdigy said:
could you re-upload the logo. The file contains errors.

Try just downloading it then opening it, I can't seem to get it to open in a browser either.
 

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lithy said:
Try just downloading it then opening it, I can't seem to get it to open in a browser either.

Did but I can only get Metal, the rest of the image is blanked out.
 
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