I made these comics last year for the school paper...(pics)

Rade K

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...i just dug them up. I think I cna improve on them. I dunno, what do you guys think??

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Nesagwa

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They are all the same drawing....... but different........

Why are they all looking left?

The writing could use some tweeks.
 

Rade K

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Meh, thats the style i was going for. Clean, simple.

It's like a ripoff of red meat.

i just wanted to fuck around with pens, scanners and photoshop.

at the very least, it came out how i imagined,

it was better than all the other comics in the paper at the time.
 

Buro Destruct

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They're not funny to me, but I like your art style.
 

pixeljunkie

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I actually dig the hell out of these...and the writing is way far out....which I like. If this were a web-comic I'd have bookmarked it for daily/weekly read.
 

OrochiEddie

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definately has potential. The strips are funny but lack the edge of experience. Make some more please id read them
 

bokmeow

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I like the second one.

You need more poon, it would make the comic strip even more enjoyable [to me].
 

Hecker

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WTF is so funny about the 2nd one? I think it's the poorest. The third one is nice.
 

Poonman

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Rade, that shits awesome, don't let anyone here tell you otherwise....

Though the subtle nuances of underground comic-book humour escape most (like the "floating" soulpatch under the handlebar moustache...)

I assure you that your ability as an artist and writer are exactly where it needs to be in order to appeal to what I imagine is your target audience (ie: asshole hipsters/pseudo intellectuals) I myself fit both the listed criteria and therefore find it hilarious.

Awesome work, IMO.
 

bokmeow

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Hecker said:
WTF is so funny about the 2nd one? I think it's the poorest. The third one is nice.

A human like you wouldn't understand.

Robot humor.
 

Curt

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I actually enjoy the style,but as far as content. Like it was said... there is none.

It seemslike it didn't take a long time to do, i'd be interested in seeing what you could do if you spent more time, and did more than the same image tweaked each time.

Perhaps someone should write material for you? Like Gabe and Tycho from Penny-Arcade (Gabe draws, Tycho writes)
 

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CurtWRX said:
Perhaps someone should write material for you? Like Gabe and Tycho from Penny-Arcade (Gabe draws, Tycho writes)

please don't bring up unfunny faggots for the remainder of this thread
 

Rade K

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CurtWRX said:
I actually enjoy the style,but as far as content. Like it was said... there is none.

It seemslike it didn't take a long time to do, i'd be interested in seeing what you could do if you spent more time, and did more than the same image tweaked each time.

Perhaps someone should write material for you? Like Gabe and Tycho from Penny-Arcade (Gabe draws, Tycho writes)

I think you are too you and stupid to understand what I'm going for. It's not an "in your face" affair like Penny Arcade is. That is probably the worst web comic ever.

This is meant to be a subtle, simple, off the wall experiment. the writing is supposed to be like that. it's supposed to be kind of strange.

you are the last person i'll consider taking advice from. after all, you are the dude that had a life altering experience at a Final Fantasy concert. If you enjoy penny arcade as well, i dont think there is much hope for you.


As for time; these are no cakewalk to punch out. these can be composed of 50 layers or more. It's actually quite inefficient and time consuming to make one the way i want it to look.

stay out of this thread, dick-weed.

as for the rest of you. thanks for the advice. and compliments.
 

Spike Spiegel

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Reminds me of Sealab 2021 humor. I like it. The first and third are great, but the second one was a bit lame, I thought.
 
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Is it completely done in Photoshop or do you scan some of your artwork? I'd still like to see more, so if you have any more of them lying around, post them.
 
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