Neo-Geo Forums
All I have that's finished enough for eyes other than my own is the opening caption- just a bubble outlined set of white letters over a black BG
"It’s the eye, so to speak. I imagine there is more than a handful of people- hundreds, thousands maybe- That have the details of the truth pass before them. Yet they know nothing of the truth we speak of. They don’t see the puzzle- they see the pieces. And even of those that see most or all of the pieces, only the eye of the gifted, or of the fucking damned- sees the truth."
"Which one are you…?"
That's the first page- and a snippet of a conversation between two central characters
"It’s the eye, so to speak. I imagine there is more than a handful of people- hundreds, thousands maybe- That have the details of the truth pass before them. Yet they know nothing of the truth we speak of. They don’t see the puzzle- they see the pieces. And even of those that see most or all of the pieces, only the eye of the gifted, or of the fucking damned- sees the truth."
"Which one are you…?"
That's the first page- and a snippet of a conversation between two central characters