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[striderpunk]

see above

 

[Tora Kouhi]

ahe M (pun intended). There is the PM feature you know

 

[@M]

Tora's right, you should use the PM feature, rather than the board itself, to contact me for something like this. I don't check my email or neo-geo.com every day, and particularly not on the weekends, so you have to have a little patience when it comes to getting a reply/action.

Also, you have a habit of sending files to me twice, which eats up a lot of my inbox space (i.e. the image you sent me was about 514k before I edited it, sending two of thems eats up a little over 1 meg of space, which put me over the top of my limit). Please only send the file once.

Anyway, here it is:

As for my critique: Again, I would say your understanding of the human body has improved over the previous drawings I've seen; you still have problem areas, but I definitely see improvement in proportions and whatnot. Your lines are still kind of messy, but they are cleaner than last time, which is also good (I'd suggest drawing in pencil, and then going over it again in ink, erasing any unnecessary pencil lines). If you're going to be drawing more seriously, I would also suggest getting some un-lined paper. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job on this piece.

 

[striderpunk]

Tora's right, you should use the PM feature, rather than the board itself, to contact me for something like this. I don't check my email or neo-geo.com every day, and particularly not on the weekends, so you have to have a little patience when it comes to getting a reply/action.

Also, you have a habit of sending files to me twice, which eats up a lot of my inbox space (i.e. the image you sent me was about 514k before I edited it, sending two of thems eats up a little over 1 meg of space, which put me over the top of my limit). Please only send the file once.

Anyway, here it is:

As for my critique: Again, I would say your understanding of the human body has improved over the previous drawings I've seen; you still have problem areas, but I definitely see improvement in proportions and whatnot. Your lines are still kind of messy, but they are cleaner than last time, which is also good (I'd suggest drawing in pencil, and then going over it again in ink, erasing any unnecessary pencil lines). If you're going to be drawing more seriously, I would also suggest getting some un-lined paper. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job on this piece.

thanks, I did it in spanish class, I will try to resize it before I send it to you, and my thing always sends the same message twice, still workin on it, and I will pm you next time

 

[striderpunk]

well no one else,