Ash Crimson and SVC Art

Solidus Snake

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These are not perfect but I try. The SVC art started as a quick Kyo sketch.

These are scans, so Ash's feet are not drawn.

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Mushiki

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The Ash Crimson art is pretty good, I like it, still, I believe his left arm is a little too big.

The SNK vs Capcom one isn't as good as the first one... you should work on character proportions and on how to consider "angles". For example, Kusanagi Kyo's hair is ok, as well as his head "silhouette", still, you can clearly notice that his face has a different angle than the rest of the head.

Other than that, it's good.
 

Solidus Snake

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Mushiki said:
The Ash Crimson art is pretty good, I like it, still, I believe his left arm is a little too big.

The SNK vs Capcom one isn't as good as the first one... you should work on character proportions and on how to consider "angles". For example, Kusanagi Kyo's hair is ok, as well as his head "silhouette", still, you can clearly notice that his face has a different angle than the rest of the head.

Other than that, it's good.
Thanks for the tips, I am still learning. I hope I can at least get art class in my life soon. Shading, color, and etc. is what I suck at.
 

Ran Thrie

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I like the Ken and Terry on the bottom of the svc drawing, nice touch.
 

MilkManX

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I like your line work. It is very clean. The complete opposite of mine. Keep it up!
 

@M

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I agree with Mushiki that the arm is a bit awkward in the Ash pic - I believe you were trying to go for a perspective where the arm seemed to be "coming out" at us, but it didn't quite work. Other than the arm, it looks good.

The SvC piece is pretty cool. There's some minor proportion and anatomy issues, but overall it comes off pretty solid. You've got good, clean lines, and the figures work well together as a group, composition wise. This one would probably look nice colored if you chose to do so.
 

BusterWolf

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Sure, there are problems with proportions and angles, but that's all a part of getting better. Take the time to practice some more, and you'll have it down in no time.

The Ash pic is pretty stinkin' sweet. The color and effects are exceedingly well done.

The SVC pic is pretty clean-cut, too. The Terry vs. Ken pic at the bottom of the piece adds a nice touch to it. I suppose that the headlining battle for SVC Chaos is Terry vs. Ken like the headliner for CvS is Ryu/Kyo and CvS2 is Ryu/Haohmaru.

Again, proportions and angles aside, good stuff. Keep it up.
 
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