*sigh* my art...

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Paiku

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Heh, so, I saw that there were lot's of my art-topics.

So now I'll bother you with some of my art.

the first 4 ones are arts of a rpg project that I'm currently working on.. might post up the trailer soon.

Astania-Freyaillustrationkopiera.jpg

HAha, just noticed, it looks like he's eating an invisible sandwich :oh_no:
Astaniaartwork.jpg

Astania-Albert.jpg

Keathshja.jpg

Polutedmechanic003.jpg

pollutedmechanic_wallpaper.jpg


:emb: took up some space...
 
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Nice, i only thing i see wrong are the hands, thick fingers and sometimes the palm is to small for the fingers with no signs of knuckles, keep working on that and you'll be golden.
 
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Thanks for you're feedbacks mates.

Yes, I need to work alot to fix these flaws. It's always like this: at first I'm kinda pleased with the results but the other day when I look at them I begin to discover tons of flaws, it's really frustrating, but I guess that is important if you want to improve.

Oh, and here's a trailer of my rpg. Hope you enjoy:multi_co:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=4B4E46512730CD7B
 
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Paiku said:
Thanks for you're feedbacks mates.

Yes, I need to work alot to fix these flaws. It's always like this: at first I'm kinda pleased with the results but the other day when I look at them I begin to discover tons of flaws, it's really frustrating, but I guess that is important if you want to improve.

Oh, and here's a trailer of my rpg. Hope you enjoy:multi_co:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=4B4E46512730CD7B
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Pretty good, though the drawing of the guy at the begining likes his flute a little too much......wink, what program your using to make that?.
 
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Your characters really seem a little too rigid to me, and they're all posing rather strangely and unconvincingly. I think you should practice more human form+anatomy, plus try to give your drawings more "life" by making your pictures more dynamic.

On the plus side, you color really, really well. I definently dig your style--reminds me of the artworks on the old-school Lunar games for Sega CD, or maybe those concept arts of BOF1/2 way back in the day.

Good luck to you on your RPG! Be sure to post a link when (if ;) ) you finish.
 
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Thanks alot for your tips, it really helps making me aware of what I should try to improve.

btw. I'm using the simple yet good program rm2k3.
 
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Just wanted to add 3 more, not quite as colorful as the others;)


Kick.jpg


Fighter.jpg


Hysterical.jpg
 
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