Puzzled Insert WIP

[le geek]

Hi,
Here is my first stab at a Shock Box Insert.

I'm going to do Thrash Rally next...

Any feedback would be appreciated


Cheers,
Ben

 

[NeoCverA]

New Kid on the Block!

Welcome to the creative forum!

Boy is it nice to see another contribution to the shockbox community! Your off to a great start too! I would only recommend that you do something about your title/logo to enhance the visibility of each letter of the titles (perhaps a stroke?)

Im not going to say much else about it since there are plenty of other members willing to give feedback.

All I will say is welcome and I look forward to your future contributions!

-NeoCverA

 

[BIG BEAR]

Very nice but you definitely need to replace the logo . It does'nt stand out.
Everything else is perfect to me.
-BB

 

[le geek]

Thanks guys, I will spend a little more time on the logo

Cheers,
Ben

 

[Grinwing]

The color bars look a bit green in that picture. You may want to reference the yellow color on other shock box inserts. Looks good!

 

[RevQuixo]

Shouldn't it be Conquer the tower of blocks through quick reflexes...

 

[le geek]

Shouldn't it be Conquer the tower of blocks through quick reflexes...

Actually, I got that sentence directly from the arcade flyer, warts and all

 

[le geek]

Here's a newer version

I like it overall, but as you can see from my close up I may have had to "over photoshop" the logo

Any ideas, or better yet does anyone have a better scan of the logo?

Cheers,
Ben

 

[NeoCverA]

I was lookin through some flyers and noticed the game screen has the UZZLED in yellow or something.......maybe that will help distinguish the text if you filled in your UZZLED in yellow.

something like this

This is just as an idea, its rough as i dont have your artsource, etc. but you get the idea what im saying.

 

[le geek]

Here's the release candidate

"tracing" the Puzzled logo properly in Photoshop was a bitch

Next insert... Thrash Rally

Cheers,
Ben

 

[RAINBOW PONY]

Rating : x8

You know what would make it x10? Make the front and side into Black, not grey!

 

[NeoCverA]

Rating : x8

You know what would make it x10? Make the front and side into Black, not grey!

not since the early days of my insert adventure has Andy said anything good about my work. Consider yourself blessed.

good job.

 

[le geek]

not since the early days of my insert adventure has Andy said anything good about my work. Consider yourself blessed.

good job.

Thanks for the praise guys. I'm uploading two versions (gray and black) to my site now...

http://www.abscape.org/legeek/f_shock.htm

Cheers,
Ben

 

[RAINBOW PONY]

not since the early days of my insert adventure has Andy said anything good about my work. Consider yourself blessed.

good job.

Because you liek teh greay inserts, I like them black, like my heart.

 

[RAINBOW PONY]

Thanks for the praise guys. I'm uploading two versions (gray and black) to my site now...

http://www.abscape.org/legeek/f_shock.htm

Cheers,
Ben

The black one is being uploaded as we speak!!!!!

 

[NeoCverA]

Because you liek teh greay inserts, I like them black, like my heart.

 

[Sundance]

Nice Job Le Geek!!! Always nice to see someone else making Shock Box Inserts. We can never have enough people making them. NeoCerva and BB are ever diligent but even they can't do them all. Thanx for contributing.

 

[grigri]

Hello,

Great job, but I think there's a problem with the links to dl the black insert

 

[le geek]

Hello,

Great job, but I think there's a problem with the links to dl the black insert

(knock on wood) FIXED!

 

[RAINBOW PONY]