Ghostlop Art set feedback please

[evil wasabi]

As done as I think I'm gonna get it, still feedback appreciated.

 

[evil wasabi]

Updated, maybe one more character art, not sure though.

Please vote

1. Done

2. Not Done

 

[Blue Steel]

Looks good to me

 

[NeoCverA]

Anal........but nice.

 

[Verythrax]

I just didn't like the MM, with the instructions in comic balloons... the idea is good, but something is the execution simply don't match well... try something more similar to the rest of image, something that blends better.

 

[evil wasabi]

I just didn't like the MM, with the instructions in comic balloons... the idea is good, but something is the execution simply don't match well... try something more similar to the rest of image, something that blends better.

Most of the work I did was done as I thought Data East would have done it so that said, all Data East mini's use the little comic bubbles I'm more for being close to what I think the real thing might be like rather than creativity, stupid I know

 

[galfordo]

1. Done

Looks very nice to me.

 

[evil wasabi]

NO! NOT DONE!

gonna get a slight update of flyer 2 up in a second

 

[evil wasabi]

Introducing more and bigger art, pick your favorite please

Revision 1


Revision 2


Revision 3

 

[Vas]

looks good to me

 

[TonK]

I have the original artwork if anyone wants it.

 

[evil wasabi]

Here's some low res ones of the original HPMAN flyers

http://img59.photobucket.com/albums/v179/metalslugnut/flyer1.jpg
http://img59.photobucket.com/albums/v179/metalslugnut/flyer2.jpg
http://img59.photobucket.com/albums/v179/metalslugnut/marquee.jpg

 

[NeoCverA]

Revision 2, just drop the brunette to the bottom of the flyer (across from the blonde).

Maybe even bring the Green dude into the How To Play Box across from the Red dude on the phone.


Thats what I would do for symetry.

Or (keeping the Blonde and Brunette at bottom on each end) get the Red dude out of the box and on top across from the Green guy and Do some Transparency on the Black box (to where some of the wallpaper shows).

that might be cool too.

 

[syringe]

Revision 3. nice work by the way.

 

[evil wasabi]

Last edit I think I like this one the best



Or I thought I could use revision 3 but turn green guy around.

 

[syringe]

Last edit I think I like this one the best



Or I thought I could use revision 3 but turn green guy around.

yeah.....with my insistance to put both characters had to be level inside or on top.

 

[GoSpits]

The final revision is definitely tops.

Layout rule: Never have a character look off the page.

 

[evil wasabi]

The final revision is definitely tops.

Layout rule: Never have a character look off the page.

Thanks for the reinforcement, I kinda liked the staggered look, but it was keeping the red and green guys too small, and having the right lady and red guy too close to the line of character sprites made the middle seem cramped. So I'm happy.

 

[GoSpits]

No prob.

Did you see what it looked like staggered and without the character sprites?
Regardless, it's solid as is.