Critiques Please

Blaine

Hinako's Cook
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I've been working on an insert for Super Dodge Ball today and I could use some feedback. Please, be honest...I can take anything.

I'd like to point out that as much as I despise the chrome effect on the "Super" part, that is how the logo is designed. Normally I'd like to keep it exact but...I don't know.

Thanks.

sdbtest.jpg
 

mvsholic

Angel's Love Slave
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The link dosen't work. <IMG SRC="smilies/crying.gif" border="0">

Nothing in that dir atm.

[ July 17, 2001: Message edited by: mvsholic ]
 

mvsholic

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Maybe it's a conspiracy? <IMG SRC="smilies/spock.gif" border="0">

Ok, found out why. You have to open up a new browser then past the url into that new browser. Great cover btw!
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Dreamwater and Yahoo both work this way.

[ July 17, 2001: Message edited by: mvsholic ]
 

mookystains

Chairman Kaga sez, "Dakis-san's the one who's goin
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on the geocities one, just copy the link and past it on this window, and no, the last link didnt work for me. EDIT:you can copy and past the last one too.

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ThePunisher

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i seriously like it its really good! <IMG SRC="smilies/glee.gif" border="0"> Not perfect but very good! <IMG SRC="smilies/glee.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/glee.gif" border="0">
 

Blaine

Hinako's Cook
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Okay, Thanks to everyone who has given me input on the cover.

I finished the spine and back.

I'd also like to thank Gabu-san...I basically used his inserts as boilerplates (and it's a blatant rip off on the spine! sorry buddy)


To view these please create a new window (ctrl-n for IE) and copy and paste the link in your window. Thanks.

Front: http://www.dreamwater.com/blaine/sdbtest.jpg

Spine: http://www.dreamwater.com/blaine/sdbspine.jpg

Back: http://www.dreamwater.com/blaine/sdbback.jpg

*please excuse the artifacting...they're like a 30 quality*
 
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