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Anya Bolton

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Read some poems I wrote? I recently posted two of them. Have you read them and if not would you like to read them and some more I wrote?

They're Corrs-inspired but I've done some that aren't Corrs-inspired. Would you like to read them?

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"kim ownz"
-Krizalid

"I ain't happy, I'm feeling sad
I've got sunshine in a bag
I'm useless-but not for long;
My future is coming on."
~Gorillaz
 
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Although not 100% NG, I'll read it anyway!
^^

Hey Anya, do you have the full lyrics or that Gorillaz song there?

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Sa, Tanoshi Mo... Boku No Honou...
(Come Out And Play... My Fire...)
Becoming A Fighter Is Not Only My Destiny... Its My Life...
kD's KoF iCe HeAvEn

[This message has been edited by Kula^Diamond (edited April 21, 2001).]
 

Anya Bolton

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Only the singing bit, not the rap bit
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The rap bit is so cool! Have you seen the video to it? It's the same kind of animation that is used in British mobile phone commercal XD


I'll try and get the rap bit. Any idea who does the rap bit (his name)?

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"kim ownz"
-Krizalid

"I ain't happy, I'm feeling sad
I've got sunshine in a bag
I'm useless-but not for long;
My future is coming on."
~Gorillaz
 

LWK

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Id love to hear the poems, i like poems, and poetic people.
 

Anya Bolton

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Here we go...


The first one I posted in ON around when I was new... ..

'ERIN SHORE

By the light of the moon she began her Search,
A quest for a land of green, faeries and sea.
When the Roman legionaries came to her Village, she asked the Druid where to Escape, to be;
The Druid he told her of a shore of green, Faeries and sea.
A place where Romans dare not tread
Upon for fear of destroying such a haven of
Which many have not read.
The child was now older than what
She was ago after several years,
Now a woman who wishes to lie
In this shore, to dream and put aside her fears.
Hair that was a warm brown had fade
To a trembling grey as were her eyes
Once a glorious jade.
But what of the Romans, whom she
Had originally meant to flee?
End thine quest, they had chosen
To leave for their empire, oh-
Stop the quest for a shore
Of green, faeries and sea!
At last after decades for her haven,
She gave a breath of sigh
And silently wept as she had found
Upon the rocks for her to be:
A shore of grass green, watchful faeries and salt sea.'

Read it before? Here's another one...


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'PADDY McCARTHY

I’m all ready, I’ve got my kit on
Going to a party with all my mates.
Paddy...[i/]my mum says.
I’ll be going to a party then down to the pub with my mates.
Paddy...[i/]my mum says...
Don’t be late...
Paddy...don’t come home late...
Be home just before eight...Paddy...[i/]

Going to a party, I’ve already got my kit on
Nothing’s gonna stop me, so put the music on.
Going then to the pub to have a drink.
Don’t drive by yourself Paddy-[i/]
Tch! That’s what she thinks!

I’ll be fine Mum, I have to go now ‘coz it’s time
What will I have with my drink? Maybe lemon and lime.
Always worried, always hurried
Well, haste makes waste.
And this is one moment I don’t want to waste.

To my parents dancing is just some nonsense
Of moving your body in different ways left for others to comment.
It’s the feel of the fun and the person you dance with
It’s silly but that person may be the one.

I’ll be fine, you’ll see after I’ve done this almost all the time.
No I won’t be late, yes I’ll come home just before eight
Why do you worry? Gotta leave now, I’m in a hurry
Don’t pat my head, you’ll mess up my hair
I can hear my little sister complaining “Why can’t I go? It’s not fair!”

Glad to out of the house, I feel the sensation coming
Like a new state of mind going
BLISS. Serenity. BLISS. Serenity. BLISS. Serenity.
The beat has my brain humming.

Paddy... don’t be late...
Paddy... I just want you safely here before eight...
Can you hear me talking to you?
Paddy... ...when I’m gone, what will you do?...
Paddy?... Paddy... ...? Paddy... ... ...[i/]

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Written for those who like to go out. Well, I don’t go to pubs though; I’m more of an innie person than an outtie person = P Corrs-inspired. I just go with the image it gives me :) And anyroad the parents’ comments on dancing is very similar to my own comment on dancing >:)
 

LWK

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Very nice poems have a unique style, wish to read more.
 
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Anya: That was some really cool stuff!
Yeah, I've seen the video clip of the song, its really cool! Love the animation. Say, heave you seen Daft Punk's anime video clips?


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Sa, Tanoshi Mo... Boku No Honou...
(Come Out And Play... My Fire...)
Becoming A Fighter Is Not Only My Destiny... Its My Life...
kD's KoF iCe HeAvEn
 

remukhan

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ya the gorillaz - clint eastwood rocks! i mean the video but the song itself is not that catchy

while daft punk - one more time really stands out. the animation as well as the song itself.
btw i like the drummer dude too but the small guy in the space station (the one who drops food when he saw invaders) is cooler.

well its nice to see some good music fans here
 
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