This poem is a bit disturbing... you may not want to read it....*Beware* (no title)

[steffy-bee]

Fuck her long and hard tonight
Lie moaning and writhing atop her sheets
Forget for an hour what is right
Increasing in tempo as her heart beats

Hold her bucking hips between your palms
Stare at the fire blazing in her blue eyes
Is her growing wetness a healing balm?
Do you feel me when you grope her thighs?

Think only of your throbbing dick
Forget the words you whispered to me
Ride her with your little prick
Then come home and make love to me

You fucking whore of a man I loved
I gave you all I had inside
Away from you my heart was shoved
For a passionate 10 minute ride

Was it fun to sit atop her face
and feel her mouth envelope you whole?
Did the suction make your heart race?
In your fantasy did she play the role?

Come to me now with your dripping face
Let me wipe off her juices so thick
Come back to me now to accept my grace
Let me cut off your puny white dick

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Tease her, Spank her, Fuck her, Thank her(tm)
Official Wench of Rude of the Turks!

[This message has been edited by Orochi Tigresa (edited April 18, 2001).]

[FacJoe]

Emmy/OT/SN/WB,

I thought these type of things arent allowed at Creative?

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[PrOzErG]

<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by FacJoe:
Emmy/OT/SN/WB,

I thought these type of things arent allowed at Creative?



Their are allowed but you have to put something in the title that say's it's for people over 21 in the Us and over 18 in Canada.The title was "This poem is a bit disturbing... you may not want to read it....*Beware* (no title)" the title was ok to me it says "... you may not want to read" and also beware so........

[Kula^Diamond]

Krizalid has just been banned from the forums but he would like to know if steffy-bee is female.

Krizalid asked me to write that.
Please don;t blame me or anything..
^^;;

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[Shiva Nataraja]

<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by FacJoe:
Emmy/OT/SN/WB,

I thought these type of things arent allowed at Creative?



She warned the posters.

[Evil_Shingo]

And Krizilad would also like to add

"Yes, you're a girl!!!"

his words, not mine -_-;

[Bufa]

i thought it meant: "beware: no title" http://www.neo-geo.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

i liked the poem, on the whole. except for the swearing. it kinda ruins the mood set by the first two verses. the last verse kinda changed the meaning around.

nice! make another! http://www.neo-geo.com/ubb/smile.gif

[steffy-bee]

I don't know who Krizilad is... but yes I am female.

As for this poem... I didn't mean to shock anyone. Forgive me if I overstepped my boundaries.

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Tease her, Spank her, Fuck her, Thank her(tm)
Official Wench of Rude of the Turks!

[This message has been edited by Orochi Tigresa (edited April 18, 2001).]

[Beast of Fire]

Is sex all you think about? http://www.neo-geo.com/ubb/smile.gif

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[steffy-bee]

No... but I do think about it often.

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Tease her, Spank her, Fuck her, Thank her(tm)
Official Wench of Rude of the Turks!

[This message has been edited by Orochi Tigresa (edited April 18, 2001).]

[Krizalid]

I think about money, food and KOF too.
I really like your work tho.

[Bufa]

revisiting once again... (actually, i just posted to ramble about an urban legend)

someplace, sometime, a particular fellow's girlfriends was angry at his decision to stop seeing her. before they left each other, they decided a last shag and be done with it.

at the climax, she cut off his knob. http://www.neo-geo.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif (i wonder why she kept the knife handy...)

(...and where.) :P

well, anyway, he walked six blocks to the hospital. he didn't take a bus because he didn't have correct change.

not sure where i heard about this, maybe Jay Leno, maybe a local tv comedy show.

[Krizalid]

Scarier than the exorcist. Disturbing too.
Exorcist is not scary or disturbing. I just saw it courtesy of the VCD shop. I was very disappointed with the crucifix masturbation scene.

[Bufa]

<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by Krizalid:
Scarier than the exorcist. Disturbing too.
Exorcist is not scary or disturbing. I just saw it courtesy of the VCD shop. I was very disappointed with the crucifix masturbation scene.

i hate to say this...
but everyone on orochinagi.com TOLD YOU SO.

heh. http://www.neo-geo.com/ubb/biggrin.gif


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[Krizalid]

But they also said it was scary and disturbing, which it isn't.