Sketches

orlandDoo · Jan 25, 2006

Hello there, im bin on the boards for a while now and decided to stop lurking and post some of my work :glee:

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Material are a number 2 ticondera pencil and some cheap printer paper.

And the next bash of images are my game that im slowly creating (as in game design document), a streets of rage type of game with rpg elements, the 3 are the main characters you get to pick each with there own style, bizara is the balanced type with powerful special moves, four eye is a quick but not so strong fighter with some magic spell's, and axel is the heavy muscle dude that week on defence but a monster offence, they all will level up as you get experience, anyways the game is called Bonebreak Fighters and will be hand animated.

There not shaded mainly becuase im going to color them later and the style is more for animation.

Mushiki · Jan 25, 2006

You have to work on the proportions.

orlandDoo · Jan 25, 2006

Mushiki said:
You have to work on the proportions.

which images are talking about?.

EDITE: i see what you mean, ill fix that today thanks.

one more image for today, spidey......

orlandDoo · Feb 3, 2006

A sketch for today, lori from kof, no use of a smudge stick (lazy to make or buy one...)

iamyagami22 · Feb 3, 2006

orlandDoo said:
A sketch for today, lori from kof, no use of a smudge stick (lazy to make or buy one...)

His sleeves are a little too thick, and his hair is a little short. Iori is also pretty skinny so It wouldn't hurt to tone down the body thickness either, overall not too shabby.

Edit: his waste is also a little too high.

orlandDoo · Feb 3, 2006

iamyagami22 said:
His sleeves are a little too thick, and his hair is a little short. Iori is also pretty skinny so It wouldn't hurt to tone down the body thickness either, overall not too shabby.

Edit: his waste is also a little too high.

yeah his sleeves are a bit thick, i decided to cut his hair shorter dedint look to good very long and as for the not being skinny, i gave him a bit toner look mainly becuase he looks more like a fighter then a scrunny looking dude (this is why i have to stop straying to much from the original design)..... :emb:

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iamyagami22 · Feb 3, 2006

orlandDoo said:
yeah his sleeves are a bit thick, i decided to cut his hair shorter dedint look to good very long and as for the not being skinny, i gave him a bit toner look mainly becuase he looks more like a fighter then a scrunny looking dude (this is why i have to stop straying to much from the original design)..... .

It's definitly not bad, but I would brush up on proportions a tad and possibly use a source for quick reference. BTW: You draw clothes very well, they look pretty natural and your shading/shadows aren't too shabby either.

orlandDoo · Feb 3, 2006

iamyagami22 said:
It's definitly not bad, but I would brush up on proportions a tad and possibly use a source for quick reference. BTW: You draw clothes very well, they look pretty natural and your shading/shadows aren't too shabby either.

Yeah my anatomy still needs refinedment, sometimes is good sometimes is wrong, still working on improving my skill, as for clothes and shading, thats probably my best area in my art that i have locked down.

Thanks for your comments.

orlandDoo · Feb 3, 2006

I guess ill sneak another one for tonight.

A quick gunstar heroes sketch.

orlandDoo · May 6, 2006

New sketches for today.

Some women.....

Capton america.

Contra dude.

Ill see what else i can find floating around my room to scan later.

orlandDoo · May 7, 2006

Alright, ill let you guess this one

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Nesagwa · May 7, 2006

Are you drawing them all squat on purpose?

orlandDoo · May 7, 2006

Nesagwa said:
Are you drawing them all squat on purpose?

Hehe, well i have a tendency to have them squat, but 2 are really squating the rest are standing or posing.

Xian Xi · May 8, 2006

Is there a reason why the girls have no tits?

Ami Tajiri · May 8, 2006

Awesome shading. You have a very nice and natural toning style. My only complaint is proportions. The legs are too short for the torso. But I screw up alot on my head proportions, so I know what it can be like.

Edit: Forget to mention that I like the poses.

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

Xian Xi said:
Is there a reason why the girls have no tits?

I can do bigger breast if need be :glee:

, but my next scans will include some nudity so ill probably need to edite my title now...

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

Ami Tajiri said:
Awesome shading. You have a very nice and natural toning style. My only complaint is proportions. The legs are too short for the torso. But I screw up alot on my head proportions, so I know what it can be like.

Edit: Forget to mention that I like the poses.

Yeah just noticed now in the resent scan, thanks.

pixeljunkie · May 8, 2006

inconsistent. Proportions range from WAY-OFF to stylistically done. The first few you posted, namely the Mai one....are not so hot. Some of the the later ones you posted are pretty good and the squatty proportions are kinda' growing on me. How old are you? Going to art school? You've definitely got promise.

The Gunstar sketch is great and doesn't look at all like your other work.

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

pixeljunkie said:
inconsistent. Proportions range from WAY-OFF to stylistically done. The first few you posted, namely the Mai one....are not so hot. Some of the the later ones you posted are pretty good and the squatty proportions are kinda' growing on me. How old are you? Going to art school? You've definitely got promise.

The Gunstar sketch is great and doesn't look at all like your other work.

Im currently getting my g.e.d to go to the art institute, there i will be studying 2D animation and 3D, tought i dont really need to study 2D animation becuase im self learned but i need to know what the real industry environment is like in practice and if i can handle that, i do need 3D animation which i need with my 3D modeling skill, as well as some painting classes which i only have little knowledge in that area.

Oh, im 20 years old by the way and thanks for the comments ill keep working on improving perportions.

EDITE: Oops forgot to say that i can do many styles and dont like to stay locked to one only.

red impact · May 8, 2006

Well done man, so what if your drawings aint in proportion or 'that' guys waist is too high. I say good for you that you put your work on here in the first place to share with everyone. RESPECT is due!

Keep up the good work and dont let all these NEGATIVE comments put you off putting more stuff up on here. bring 'em on!

Game on!

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

red impact said:
Well done man, so what if your drawings aint in proportion or 'that' guys waist is too high. I say good for you that you put your work on here in the first place to share with everyone. RESPECT is due!

Keep up the good work and dont let all these NEGATIVE comments put you off putting more stuff up on here. bring 'em on!

Game on!

Haha, thats alright man there giving there opinion and thats what i like as long as its a right opinion im ok with and thanks man.

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

Alright last scans for today, rest are 3d models.

Ami Tajiri · May 8, 2006

Hey, that's awesome. I never got into 3D work, so I admire the poeple who are good at it. I really like the dolphin. The first one is your Axel character, right? I like his face.

By the way: You talking about the Art Institute in Tampa? I'm hoping to go there, too.

Nesagwa · May 8, 2006

Squat = short and stubby midget proportions, not the pose.

orlandDoo · May 8, 2006

Nesagwa said:
Squat = short and stubby midget proportions, not the pose.

Ah ok dedint know that, thought you ment bending down, yeah becuase the drawings that have lower legs short do looks midgety becuase of my perportion problems which of course im trying to fix.

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